My first video

[beeonabike]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-Iiz7wo92dc&context=C39b4eeeADOEgsToPDskL7pKNKVVfVAlycjHnP5vM-
CAN you guys give me some constructive feedback on this video i posted.
It is my first video so dont be harsh. Thanks

 

[Punyesh]

Not being harsh or anything, the moves are great but yo lack somewhat smoothness and a little speed. Work on it and it'll look much better.

 

[formula]

Yep, you need to keep practicing them so they're smoother but they look good. Well done.

 

[zanethresher]

To have them all be relatable, have a group in each video maybe acting out the latest thing but in a comedic way. For example, someone can pretend to be Justin Bieber, and acts him out in an exaggerated way.

 

[MichaelJames]

Nice! Yep, I agree with the above. Just work on your smoothness a bit and you've got it. Overall, great moves and good presentation! When it comes down to it, practice as much as you can, then practice some more. I know it sounds cliché, but you'll see yourself improving as the days go by.

-MJ