Not bad Nick. A couple specifics for you that will hopefully make a difference.
1. On your second cycle (the one using the sleight with the same mechanics as Brad Christian's one handed pass) you flashed. You didn't so much flash the spectators card as you did the secret to the move. Most spectators wouldn't be able to figure it out, but they would be able to know that something fishy is going on. It takes away from the magical nature of it all. The biggest thing here is to slow down. If your sleights are good, you can do all of this slow and it will look better.
2. When you do the "pop-up" move to finish your video off, it is hard to see. The best seat in the house for that move is up close from the side. When you go to set the deck on top of the bent card, make sure that the spec. can see the bent card being flattened by the deck. This way they know it is in the deck. Also make sure they can see the big moment very clearly, from the side. This sleight is very unimpressive unless they can clearly see the bent card in the middle of the deck suddenly pop up from the top of the deck.
Other than that, well done. Unlike the above poster said, your ACR was visual, but there are just a couple things to make the visuals better. Also, unlike the above poster, I think your Marlo Tilts were excellent. They looked just like you want them to look, which is very different from what you are actually doing.