I would say that you need to think about the performance more, rather than the moves. If you watch, for example, the Virts original video, they featured a simple bridged riffle shuffle to great effect, simply because of the attitude and performance style. Your video seemed to be more about showing off which flourishes you can do, and trying to get from one to the other as quickly as possible.
One key point in acheiving a good performance is working out in your own mind what it is the audience is supposed to be appreciating. For example, with an armspread, the factors that make it look good are the smoothness and evenness (even-ness? It doesn't look right however I write it) of the formation of the spread, the distance it travels in the air, and the dexterity with which you catch it. In other words, it may be an idea to pause after the spread has been formed to allow this to sink in, consider the positioning of your body to emphasise the distance between your hands before the catch, and then make the catch itself with more dramatic emphasis. This is just an example of one particular move, but I'm sure you can see how this process can be applied to other moves.
I hope you take this as constructive criticism, as I will if you comment when I finally get round to getting a video up......
