Hello mate,
The good thing about this tutorial is that you really filmed from a lot of angels that is great, you can really see what's going on and what's happening so that's great.
But I got a few tips that can help you abit, I don't know if this is your work or someone elses but this might be abit too good to put up on Youtube, I rather hear you talk instead of music in the background it also help you slow down the tutorial because i tried to catch up to you and it was pretty hard. Instead of music put a mic in and talk and take breaks so people can catch up.
But else the flourish was great, quality awesome and you really showed all angels =)
Goodluck and thanks - JokerZingo/Markus