I agree with ^ in that I don't think it flowed well. I think it was more due to the construction of the effect though. I don't think the moves were as well thought out it could've been - it wasn't clean in the sense that there were a lot of unnecessary motions to cover the sleights, so the sleights maybe weren't the best choice for the situation.
Other things don't really make sense, like taking out the other threes. It was performed fine, there weren't any real flashes I don't think, but it was more that you were tense in moments that you did perform the sleights, and it did show that something was happening.