critiques?

[BlackQueen]

I finally have my own youtube channel, and am attempting more difficult sleights. could anyone leave some critique here or as a comment on the video(s)? My channel is ItsMagicITellYou thanks for all your help!

 

[Goth]

One thing I noticed was that your patter is very unnatural, I don't know if you're nervous or using patter that isn't yours but you should definitely calm down and use your own patter. There's many books on presentation and performance saying the same, that you should be yourself. Maybe you are being yourself and using your own patter, try to make it more natural.