theory11 — Magic Tricks & the World's Finest Playing Cards

My Cherry Control

You've got the mechanics down pretty good...but the move itself looks just that; mechanic.

Keep working at it to smooth it all into one flowing motion and you'll have a very sneaky control in your arsenal.

Looks great!
 
Doesn't look natural. Not flashing is the first step of it.

You need tons of work on your diagonal insertion. Make sure to do it the second before you insert the card. The "move" before the fan had a big movement which was not natural looking at all.