Honestly, it's not impressive. You're on the right track by being creative and thinking of cool things, but it's just not that good in my opinion. It might not be the method, but it looks like you're just switching your fingers under the shake.
Is it "wire-worthy"? Well, for me, it would be no. Keep trying, you'll come up with something great.
I would give you 99 cents not to post it to the wire. Keep on working and wait till you come up with something amazing.. Dont post it until you have worked on it for a year and made it the best possible routine ever! Then post it! Never give up!
That really isn't an effect. It is basically the fingers switching / motion from the effect Traveling Cash. It would not make it through the submission process.