My Twinsplit Remix Attempt

[Cadillac6595]

hey guys/gals looking for some feedback on my performance of dan and dave's twinsplit remix. Any suggestions or any other things you'd like to mention, I'd love to hear from you!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TZMrfub2DfM

 

[dummyisdumb]

VERY NICE! Done very slowly and visually, may be even better than the Bucks'.

EDIT: Looking back, you could work on the second part.

 

[Ampersan5340]

4/5 if you didn't cut away it would've been a 5

 

[dejavu05]

Wow! Very nice job!

 

[TTFTCUTS]

I liked it alot. I thought it was done very well and very smoothly. Keep up the good work

 

[CardMagician24]

That was perfect