Potential wire flourish

[MarcusW]

Hi, I have been working on a flourish lately, and I wanted to see what everyone thinks of it, my main questions being...
-is it good enough for the wire? (for free)
-would you download it?
-is it original?
-and generally what you think

here is a video of it
http://instagram.com/p/nm_-fslVLV/

I would love to hear some feed back, thanks every one!

 

[Nate Thompson]

I like the flourish idea, it looks easy, but you might need to make it a little more smooth and flow better. With a little more work this could be a great flourish.

 

[MarcusW]

Cheers for the advise, my thoughts behind it being that it is not quite ready, still need some tweaking, but it is a very easy flourish. but what I want to create with this is an easy version of the vertical extension in Pandora (if you know what I mean) I have been looking for a thing like that for a wile with no luck so I thought I might try and create it myself.