I agree with the most part of what you said however there were a few problems with the video I found that made it hard to watch.
First your voice you mention it with the pop up but if you mention it why not fix it?
Secondly it cuts a lot, I personally found this to be quite distrating aswell.
Towards the end when your hand goes inside your shirt, why? Also at the end you throw the DVD away, that shows me that you have little respect for it. If you were doing it to be cool I am sorry if I missed that but I don't believe it is cool.
As for the review itself you only spent about 30 seconds on the most important part of the DVD that is the teaching. You completely missed out a lot of the extra methods that are taught on the DVD like the which hand tells which are head and sholders abotu what else is out there. You also missed out on explaining even though this effect is purely psychological it does have a very high hit rate. However Patrick goes into talking about how you can make the effect 100% by adding back in the logic puzzle and a little bit from Max Maven.