I posted a response on the magiccafe as Satoeri, but just to give you a bit more.
I understand the urge to post videos of this routine, and the others, but don't sell yourself short and give into that urge. To be honest, I think you do have the mechanics down decent, but as a whole, it is completely rushed, hard to follow, you are using half-dollar sized coins, whereas ponta uses morgan sized coins, and the whole idea of "flow" is lost in the speed.
Really really slow down and watch Ponta's video. You will notice that his hand positions are completely flawless on the muscle pass change, the turn over load and change, etc... These are very very important small subtleties, and by far, the hardest part to get down perfect.
It is ok to ask for advice with your routine, but I would password protect it on vimeo for those who have the actual DVD. You did put in some work, but I have been working on this routine since the week of release in JAPAN, which was way earlier than the US release date, and although I also have it down quite well, I am not going to put up a video that doesn't do it justice.
TBH, this was not a video that "shows the routine can actually be done", it was more of a video that shows "this is what it will look like if you hurry through it and don't put in the time it deserves."
I know that sounds harsh, but it is the truth.