That was sweet man, good job.
You asked for critques, well prepare yourself then
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The bluff pass, as stated above, was a bit obvious. With the replacement, don't come forward, but rather continue to move your arm with the top packet to the left "up your arm" and then back down "over" your thumb to do the replacement. Trust me, it makes a world of difference. ( watch my vids if you don't believe me
) I know the area you were in was confined, but moving your body side to side to show the card being turned over and replacement also is a nice subtlety, in case you didn't know.
Your pass is great, but the break seemed a little big, it could've been the angle, but after about 3 shots of the same pass, the break was painfully obvious. I don't know if its like that in performances, but for this it seemed a bit to big for comfort IMO.
Other than that I thought it was really good.
Keep it up
Jacob