'The prince that became a king' ~ Original

[Randomand]

Well as far as the tricks go, there is no much originality there.
But the composition of tricks and the story (and the whole trick itself) is my own invention.
Enjoy the video, Youtube link : http://youtu.be/U2NSSZ1O2S0.


Video itself :
[video=youtube;U2NSSZ1O2S0]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U2NSSZ1O2S0[/video]

 

[NapoleonII]

I actually really enjoyed the story!

The handling of the trick itself needs some work though.
Work on your general card handling: the way you hold the deck and manipulate the cards is awkward and cramped.
Your DL is ok, but when you perform it try letting gravity do the work once the cards are vertical (0:05). See how you turn the jack over at 0:13? Do the same for your DL.

Don't point out flashes in the video! Just re-shoot it, take pride in your art.
Also, don't ask for views in exchange for reveal/tutorial , and then post it to a magician's forum, things won't go well if you do.
Might I suggest you don't make a tutorial at all, as those who will want a tutorial will be those who aren't dedicated to magic, as anyone who is already knows how it is done.

Thanks for the vid though, I might adapt a similar story to some of my tricks.

 

[Randomand]

@Napoleonll

You are quite correct about most parts, I am quite new to card manipulation so I am trying to do my best (so thanks for the reply and the explanation on what needs to get better)

I do realize that the DL could of been much cleaner on both uses.
The story behind it tho, I shot this video so many times, that my hands got tired, and wanted to upload it so bad, that by fact I jumped the gun and uploaded the best version I've managed to make.

Anyhow thanks a lot for the comment, and ill try to work on my card handling more.
And I probably will never reveal the trick because it will never reach 10k views hehe.