Ello.
Its OK, but not perfect (In my opinion). But here's what you need to change (Still in my opinion):
1. You flashed between every single production. I would believe that could be prevented if you had a different camera angle. Instead of right on you should have the camera pointing a little more down at your hands. Not much, just a little.
2. Slow down! You should take small pauses between every single production, else it will just look sloppy. Watch Lee Asher's performance and you'll see that he does it much slower than you. It's not about the speed, it's about the smoothness and the "non-flashing".
3. You probably don't wanna hear this, but practice! It's the best way to eventually perfect it.
Anyways, overall the performance was OK, no more, no less. But you need to practice a lot more before you get it perfect. My advice would be to have the video up just a little bit longer so that you can get more feedback from more magicians, and hopefully those who are more experienced in magic than me. You'll probably get a lot of tips on how you should practice, and after that you can take it down to just practice more and upload a new video in 1-2 months or so. That's my advice.
//RedPants