What do you think?

Jack Webster

Jack Webster

Jun 7, 2008
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What do you guys think of this video I made. Its just a bunch of old clips I had and I decided to make them into a video.

Can you tell me ways i can Improve and not just say its not good or any thing

EDIT: i messed up on a couple of tricks so i am refilming them new improved video soon
 
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FOO:L

May 3, 2008
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Erdnase needs work. You flashed on indecent, the card being pulled through in Kaos should be higher up so the spectator can see it coming over the edge of the cards, the half vanish vanish was... abit stiff, and the ultragaff box window change thing needs work.

also i dont like the fact that you have a shape shifter tutorial up just because you dont like E.
 
dontavius+R

dontavius+R

Oct 5, 2008
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Pretty nice video man, but I would watch out at 47seconds about the bag. Don't want to reveal but watch your angles, Im sure you know what I mean.
 
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r.zhang

May 3, 2008
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It was okay, a lot better then the other stuff I've seen from you. A lot of your moves seem stiff and unnatural; try loosening your arms because you look like a robot. When you were doing the haunted deck, stop adjusting the card to get it to turn over. The beauty of it is to never touch the cards and you're practically forcing it to turn over. And i agree, take down the Shapeshifter tutorial because it's not even E's move; I believe it was published in Desouza's Deceptions but correct me if I'm wrong.
 
StevenLevitt

StevenLevitt

Oct 29, 2007
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me doing a lot of tricks
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I can see that, I would rather you perform one effect really well, than perform about 20 effects in a video pretty poor* (sorry to sound crude). I understand that you still maybe learning, but quality is better than quantity every time, just work on one effect you enjoy performing best, and perform it at your best. Keep it up dude.

*Sorry - I shall change that, they were not typically "poor" I just didn't feel the magic, or the performance. I feel that you were just doing a trick (if that makes sense).
 
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