Nicely and neatly done. I liked the moves you intergrated as they suit your style.
The only thing I would suggest is to not speed up at all 'dirty' moments (which were the only moments you sped up at). Also, you may want to use a four of a kind as it adds quite a bit of value to the routine because it shows spectators that it really were those four cards magically travelling from one place to another. Showing the faces of random cards wouldn't add anything unless you have four spectators and those cards being their four selections.
Just my two cents.
very good, really smooth. Deffinetely enjoyed it. well done!
That was pretty awesome. Just wondering, do you have any patter for live performances?