Thanks for sharing your video. There are a few things I would say about it. in my opinion, I think the actual presentation needs more work, it kinda comes off too narrarator style. With a better patter the effect will flow more easily. The girls reactions (although she never said it) seemed more like a "he's good with cards" type instead of a "magic" feeling, just my opinion. As far as the handling, I would say you should work on your DL to make it look more smooth. When I perform a DL the main difference is I just flip the card over only like halfway then let it fall back to the deck on its own. I think letting it fall on its own would look better only because from what I see, it seems like your putting a tight grip on the cards and not letting go until it hits the deck. In the end, I still give you props for going out and performing, that's always a good thing. Well that's just my .02 cents for now.
