I'm very new to magic and I was wondering if I could get some feedback on my first routine. Stuff you caught, suggestions for improvement, etc. Anything helps!
Cheers,
Elijah.
Cheers,
Elijah.
But I feel that it's pertinent to let you know that this effect uses no duplicate pre-signed cards. It is genuinely the spectator's free choice and they can sign it however they please.
Okay! Your feedback is really helpful. Means a lot manI don't doubt that it is the original signed card. The problem arises in the psychology of the set up and story. As a spectator it can become obvious as soon as you mention the guy "never finished the trick" I feel like by that point we all know the card will be in the box. We don't expect the gum box to be there but we also think, why is it there other than to prove you can get the card into a more impossible location. Having the gum box play a larger role at the beginning will make it seem more like the gum box got into the card box and somehow their card is there too.
Like the above reviewer mentioned, practice practice practice! because of the direction you have chosen with this particular effect. You require the look of having literally done nothing. So anything you do that is a little off, reads VERY off to the viewer. This especially comes into play with the length of the story. By the end I feel like I am waiting for the "punch line" as it were for a long time.
Again keep at it. This is the start of a great effect.