Criticism Wanted Please

[slieghtlyimpossible]

Hey all, i just posted a new video and i wanted to see if you guys had anything that i could improve on in either editing, filming or the actually magic/flourishing.. I know i'm not much of a flourisher but i still try.. Here it is

Thanks guys!

 

[James Smith]

Wow very good, the editing was very good except for a few rough spots from about 1:30 to 1:50. I didn't really like the definitions flashing on the screen during the video, but other than that I really enjoyed. It looks like you put a lot of work into this.

 

[SamRochon]

I liked it, everything was excellent mechanics-wise, very impressive!
I don't dig the bedroom/livingroom scene though, get out there and find some neat filming locations! Maybe get a someone to operate the camera too, it would let you get some awesome shots and really show off your skill! Also the credits were much too long, I found.

 

[slieghtlyimpossible]

Thanks guys.. i'll take that into account..