I prefer the first poster over the second, but my one recommendation, which is hearty, is to darken your face a bit.
No joke, when I first clicked that link, it took a second to load and when it did, I jumped a little. Your face is so bright in it, and it's so central, that it's jarring. The rest of the information was lost because I was so focused on your face glaring out at me. Take out some of the brightness and that will lessen. Also, when I asked my girlfriend sitting right next to me, she said, "looks like a prison photo."
So try to take some of the brightness off the face and I think it looks good.