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I like it, but I think it could use some work.
Some of it looked a little akward and the constant slow motion was a bit distracting. It was a little sloppy but with some practice I know you'll get it!!!
Some of it looked a little akward and the constant slow motion was a bit distracting. It was a little sloppy but with some practice I know you'll get it!!!
its good but still have alot of room to improved, and the beginning I feel unecessary because it's like the (wth) moment. Beside that, just keep practicing your be there in no time.
I'm not going to lie. I'm not sure what part one was like, or what the project is...
But I was bored enough to stop watching by the time you got the cards out of the box. I'll go skip/watch/edit this post...but just tossing an unopened pack of bikes around is boring.
There are good closed-box manipulations and flourishes, but what you were doing turned me away where it was (probably) supposed to build suspense/interest.
*goes to watch rest of video*
Alrighty then.
Overall it was good. There were points that you put emphasis (slow motion or second looks) that I probably wouldn't have done editing-wise (mainly the pirouette and tossing of a packed from one hand to the other, just my opinion though)
As said above, just a little more practicing and it'll grab more attention. I would put myself right at if not one step below where you are as a flourisher. hitting the moves...but every time someone sees they're going to say 'practice more on this'. ^ ^.
-Rik
But I was bored enough to stop watching by the time you got the cards out of the box. I'll go skip/watch/edit this post...but just tossing an unopened pack of bikes around is boring.
There are good closed-box manipulations and flourishes, but what you were doing turned me away where it was (probably) supposed to build suspense/interest.
*goes to watch rest of video*
Alrighty then.
Overall it was good. There were points that you put emphasis (slow motion or second looks) that I probably wouldn't have done editing-wise (mainly the pirouette and tossing of a packed from one hand to the other, just my opinion though)
As said above, just a little more practicing and it'll grab more attention. I would put myself right at if not one step below where you are as a flourisher. hitting the moves...but every time someone sees they're going to say 'practice more on this'. ^ ^.
-Rik
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