I'd appreciate any feedback, thanks.

[Alfie Whattam]

Below theres a few videos of me performing to a few celebrities and what-not.
I understand there not 'perfect' or whatever and I guess thats why I'm asking for feedback upon these.
Any constructive critism on how my performances can improve is appreciated.

Thanks

[video=youtube;9U25mJIYqwo]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9U25mJIYqwo&feature=plcp&context=C44cac35VDvjVQa1PpcFNeyJZNLGY5uKhMOZqYF1-lrZEcLK9rMU4=[/video] Simple hits hard with Elly Fiorentini.

[video=youtube;85llS9L0OUY]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=85llS9L0OUY&feature=channel&list=UL[/video] Magic for BBC 1's Waterloo Road cast.

[video=youtube;akWrfosU0y0]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=akWrfosU0y0&feature=autoplay&list=UL85llS9L0OUY&lf=channel&playnext=1[/video] From the YouTube Britain's Got Talent show.

[video=youtube;Kl20w2U-XM4]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Kl20w2U-XM4&feature=BFa&list=ULEGou-WiCkJc&lf=channel[/video] The mind reading effect near the end with Stephen Mulhern.

 

[Josh Burch]

The spectator reactions are great so you're doing something right It's tough to give too much feed back on your performance because the spectators steal the show. From what I can see you look like a really engaging performer

 

[Alfie Whattam]

Thanks very much, that means alot.
I do try my best

 

[formula]

I wonder if this is another one of your ground breaking "social experiments".

As for my opinion on your videos, you're amateur at best. Your magic is decent (though outdated) but you lack any real character. Overall you seem like a typical youngster that grew up on David Blaine.

 

[tsarothpaco]

I may only be able to view two of the videos since I live in the US, but I'd have to agree with formula. It doesn't seem you have a character, and you lack good presentation. I can be entirely wrong on this next statement, but it seems like the audiences are either reacting like such out of politeness; or they're doing it for the camera (it even seems like that one girl was looking at you the entire time during your card to mouth). Nothing really wrong with the mechanics, but the other areas are lacking.