My new routine

May 18, 2008
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I liked it for the most part, I'm just wondering about two things...

1) If there isn't a better time to do the moves. The routine was pretty "move-y" and I feel like the moves were all done during pauses, or on-beats when they could have been timed more deceptively.

2) What the justification is. There's really no presentation that makes sense for me about why I'd choose a card, the others are blank but then they come back, my card turns blank, the deck changes color, a card changes back and it's a selected card. I feel like it's too much.

It looks good, it just needs to be justified.
 
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