Hey guys heres a rough idea of the new logo... thoughts? Like I said this is still in the design phase of my new logo
The style is in Comic Strip style art. Like Farside, Doonesbury, ect. Within that style it fits Josh as a performer as that is another of his hobbies. He certainly could get a caricature artist but I honestly think the detailing on a caricature would not show up well on a business card. That said, I kind of prefer his original sketch as I think the look fits his target audience better. I think the original sketch should stay but just change the overall composition of the rest of the card. Most of the specifics on that have already been mentioned in others in their posts.Eyebrow placement conveys a message of confused or unsure to me... Not sure if that's what your going for.
If I were you, I'd contact my local art college, and get in touch with a student there, and have them draw a characiture of you for use on your business card. I think you'll get more mileage out of that, compared to what you are currently using.
The new logo looks a lot more professional all I would say is just to clean it up a bit more and it will be good I think.
William Draven said:Eyebrow placement conveys a message of confused or unsure to me... Not sure if that's what your going for.
If I were you, I'd contact my local art college, and get in touch with a student there, and have them draw a characiture of you for use on your business card. I think you'll get more mileage out of that, compared to what you are currently using.
eostresh said:The style is in Comic Strip style art. Like Farside, Doonesbury, ect. Within that style it fits Josh as a performer as that is another of his hobbies. He certainly could get a caricature artist but I honestly think the detailing on a caricature would not show up well on a business card. That said, I kind of prefer his original sketch as I think the look fits his target audience better. I think the original sketch should stay but just change the overall composition of the rest of the card. Most of the specifics on that have already been mentioned in others in their posts.
Ok that sparked my curiosity, what's with the quote on the bottom of the card?
very nice! Do you have any other quotes? I suggest putting them on the back and write what you can be hired for. But it's a great design!
Just an FYI
What you see on Photoshop is not always what the Business cards end up looking like - especially with Gradient Overlays etc...
Keep that in mind.
To be honest...the card you took as inspiration it´s horrible..I advice you to take a trip to the web and search bussiness card design...I am sure you can find better inspirations...
btw...here is my card, as you can see..I also used the links in the back...
good luck and have a nice day!!
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