Osprey

[DavidMisner]

Hey guys, just uploaded a single move video of a move of mine called Osprey. I've been working on it for a while now, and just wanted some feedback.

As a note, the 2nd "part" of the move (with the display) is optional and was not part of the original flourish.

Remember to watch in HQ!

Osprey

Thanks,

David

 

[chriswiehl]

i dont know much about flourishing but it looked good
good camera work too i liked it

 

[FatalAce]

Nice. Looks very similar to one of my flourishes: Flea Circus:

http://www.vimeo.com/1645639

 

[Aris.SA]

Nice, I like the flow, maybe if you can develop it more, it could become something much better, nice nice.. I didnt like the text effect, neither the font and that thing, just my opinion...

 

[praetoritevong]

I'm not the biggest or the most knowledgeable around, but this was my impression: a clumsier Clueless-type flourish. The reason I say it's clumsy is partly because of the flow... More than the speed though, the front card actually just blocks everything that happens behind it for all but a half-second of the flourish, so I never really saw anything interesting, just a fat card back that turned once.

I do like these types of flourishes,but honest opinion and stuff, I don't mean to come across as harsh or rude though... Respect man, keep it up.

 

[trashmanf]

it didnt look like anything original, just a wings-of-the-bird type single card moves and then you waved your fingers. It might look cool if you did it faster and smoother. But for the same conceptual idea, done WAY better, I like the_unkown's creation "Dalena":
http://decknique.net/forums/showthread.php?t=4513&highlight=dalena

 

[praetoritevong]

I believe the video's been removed.