That was quick, so you can be proud of nailing the balance etc. The false transfer, misdirection and the whole motivation for that effect is gone though...
Take your time with it,
Also - try and make it your own - use another production at the end for example. As well as that - you open your hands twice, just like Ponta does on the video.
Again, you do it incredibly well - and if that was a first take, better than Ponta. Just a shame to turn into him.