Suggestions For This Flourish

[MasterMagician88]

Stall In Progression

I don't know how to delete this thread, so I'm just going to say thanks for the suggestions. I will continue to work with it and hopefully make it into something awesome!

 

[RyanHazlewood]

I'm not literate in cardistry but to me it didn't have a flow like other flourishes do and it seemed stiff. Like I said I'm not in a position to tell you what to do but that's just my preference of the flourish.

 

[wZEnigma]

I could barely see the damn flourish. From what I managed to catch, it doesn't look super original but has some nice parts to it. Maybe repost with a better video?