theory11 — Magic Tricks & the World's Finest Playing Cards

The Fantastic Fours!

Any thoughts, criticisms for this? Thank you!

I love the routine, and I loved the patter. One thing though, it just needs a little bit of clarity. There is a lot going on, and it's going on fast. Slow down the presentation, and let some thing sink in. Besides that, it's pretty nice routine. Liked it.
 
I really liked all the magical moments and it makes sense with a story, a fun story at that.

Only thing is you should break down when the 4 cards turn singular.

It happens right away way too close to the deck. At least set it down, wait a second, then show it as 1. Or give space away from the deck so it makes a more impossible image in the head.
 
Thank you so much for your thoughts and ideas!!! Another thing... something I for some reason did not do in the video is make the selected 10 be the card that ends up in my pocket... it's much more logical than what I presented.