The angle you were performing at seemed a bit awkward. You dont normally peform with your hands way below your waist if your standing up. It kinda made both effects dwindle a bit. The inversion was nice, polish your cardini (PM me if you need help.)
The queens effect, like the others said, does need more work.
Again the angle gave it a bit of an awkard feel, because you had to adjust a large amount to show the vanishes. You have the mechanics, just get it smoother.
Your boy,
Fez