White Owned.
Magicpros, my best advice would be to talk less. You seemed to tell us everything, we could tell what was happening by watching. You don't need to say '...and I swing cut them into the centre' for example, too much detail. And saying that you faro the packets together. I'm not saying to not use patter, just don't tell us what you are doing the whole time.
Lynx, that was a lovely routine. It flowed nicely and worked well with the music. You also seemed to be really confident. Great job.
Hey I had made a different video with less patter a couple weeks ago and everyone said it was **** so I added more patter and that was the outcome.
white lynx great routine, I liked the music but wished for some patter like an intro spoken by you like
Hi this is a trick that involves ....
Even a simple line like
Hello I am White_lynx86
and then start the music. I just felt it could have been so much more.
Also I think music is only good when you try to customize it for that routine. Like david copperfields
Grandpa's Trick routine.
Magicpros
Practice Practice Practice
Learned that the hard way just look at my battle involving table work with magicman.
Go ahead go look I'll wait.
do you see the difference between nexus and magicman.
Also if you chose to patter don't spell it out to the specs. They don't care.
Take your time pattering complete nunsuch, create mystery and a build up.
You look like you are in middle school still, what I may suggest to you is taking a theatre class it will help with ad-libbing.
I believe both routines where unique in their own rights and I enjoyed them both.
Peace,
Nexus
Sorry Magicpros I just remembered one other little thing that bugged me about your trick. At the start, you have to go through the deck and find the four aces. This slows the whole trick down and quite frankly looks messy. If you know you are going to do a trick with the four aces, have them set up somewhere you can produce them, or even just on top of the deck. It makes the whole trick flow better and speed it up a little. Trust me on this, it'll stop people getting bored before the trick has started.
I did that for a few people and they thought I had set up the deck since I automatically pulled the four aces off the top of the deck!