Zac,
Do you plan on getting a normal domain instead of the free one? If you want to book gigs then you have to look like you're already booking them...it starts with a normal website like ZMagic.com instead of the Wix website.
The main problem with the website is that there is no "direction"...you don't have a target audience. It says you're a magician but who do you want to perform for? Company events? Kid parties? Trade shows? Your first step is to define your market. Many magicians make the mistake of trying to perform for every market (kid shows, festivals, company events, colleges, trade shows, etc). But if you were having a trade show then who would you hire....a magician who says he does all the above or a magician who says he is the top trade show entertainer in the world?
So your first step is....define your market.
Once you define your market, you need to create a "profile" of the person in that market. For example, lets say you want the kid show market. You create the "average" mom. Her name is Lily. Lily has 2 kids and one of them is having a birthday party. She hasn't hired a magician before and doesn't know what to expect. She doesn't know how much it will cost but she wants someone who is local. Lily works really hard and always feels like she is multitasking...etc etc etc.
You create the profile of the average person in your market and this profile allows you to create the text/copy on your website.
Right now, your home page says "Hello everyone...I hope you're having a wonderful day." That doesn't create a desire to hire you. It doesn't give them any information, etc. If you wanted to do kid shows then you would start by saying "Hi, you came to my website because you're looking for a local magician for your kid's party." (and they think "I sure am")
The Text on your website:
People do not read websites...they scan (this has been researched a lot by copywriters). You want the important text on your website to stand out. Take a look at my website (
www.benjibruce.com) and notice how some text is highlighted in purple. It makes things easier to read.
"My Show" page:
The text on this part needs to sell. Right now you're only describing the effects you perform. People don't want to hear about the effects, they want to know the results you produce. Instead of saying "I'm a magician/mentalist" (they already know this since they're on your website) you should say something like "You're probably looking for a top-notch magician for your event." (narrow this down even more once you know who your target audience is).
"Services" page:
If something doesn't add, it detracts. In the stand-up section, you say "This is for people 16 and older ideally." Saying "ideally" at the end doesn't add anything to the text...delete it.
Overall, you should change a lot of the text on your site and add more video (testimonials & performances). I recommend you study "copywriting" and buy a book by Dan Kennedy on copywriting/sales letters
And for more info on building a website...check out the video on my marketing blog...
http://paidtoperform.blogspot.com/2011/03/building-your-website.html