Thanks for all the insight guys!
I really wish I could have re-filmed it after getting your advice Trash...but it just wasn't gonna happen...but w/e its not THAT bad...
-Brad
PS: Trash check your review XCM inbox on YouTube O.o
hey brad, first off all good work for entering the competition even though you didn't have a team to help, you definitely made a video to be proud of. I liked the moving camera work with the pans, zooms, pivots etc, but I feel that you should have used your body more to help make it exciting... 90% of the video is you standing there as still as a statue except for your hands moving making cuts! even a fan or an armspread would have been enough to break up the monotony of this! and you are constantly looking down at your hands too, it just made it feel kind of introverted, rather than sharing your skills with us, the viewer.
to summarize, you did a lot of things well, but I think you can do much better to make it more interesting for the audience ! not bad, 3/5 stars from me dogg
you certainly like T11, but wasnt this meant to be a collab video, not just one person?
edit: first, lol, and btw how do the T shirts feel, i dont plan on buying one im just interested...
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