"I didn't want to make this a sappy, calm, short, slow, flourishing video. This is the opposite."
Sam Keefe
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Samuel18 years ago
Constructive criticism will always take you further than a "great job" or "looks awesome." Don't bash him for putting effort into evaluating the video.
To me, I think everything was very generic, stuff I've seen many times. It was done well, though, so I'm not saying you did a bad job at all. If anything, I think you should try to get your hands looking more... relaxed, I suppose. Your fingers just looked awkward in my opinion. Keep up the good work, it looks like you've come a long way.
Its time to take out the trash...man..!!
1): Pulled a virts? I think thats what makes a flourish video exiting
2): Editing and Flourishing go hand in hand. Don't go hating on a video with good editing just because you can't edit your own videos properly. (And yes I have seen you videos)
3): If it was that painful for you, why did you watch the whole thing?
4): Omg bro like you know stop calling everyone Dogg! FO SHIZZLE!
Do go hating on me now, its just my opinion.
well, you could have done some cool fast combos and twirls and junk if you were going for "opposite of slow" but instead you pulled a virts and just edited together a bunch of snippets from various clips. showing the end result of a 4-ace production is not as impressive as showing the actual production itself. same goes for several of your display cuts and fans.
I will give you deserved props for some of those cuts, I think there was some cool originality even though they were all sybil variations, you performed them well. But you edited in and out of them so much that who knows what the whole moves looked like, LOL
and there were tons of time spent just on a black screen or wavy-video-effects or just a quick clip of you waving your hands in circles,.... it was really painful for me dude. granted just my opinon, a lot of thse theory 11 dudes seem to be liking it but for me this editing took what could have been a great video and made it terrible, 2/5 stars from me dogg.
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