yes, I agree with most of the criticism on this page, your first move was really too slow and since you weren't DOING ANYTHING with the other hand, there was no point in having the packets held like that. the rest was okay but I was hoping to see something really original, all I really saw was minor variations. I want to see original concepts. okay peace out not bad 3/5 stars from me dogg
The first flourish was a bit too choppy - I didn't seen the point of the other two packets. The next clip (the one handed ace production) was alright - you did it better in the tutorial on Decknique. I thought you would have improved. The Pandora variation was alright and the spinny display thing after that wasn't that bad although it looked like you were trying to add too many one card packets. The next ace production was really cool - I liked it. The rest were pretty good.
I suggest what you need to improve on is fluidity. A lot of the moves were quite choppy and you need to cut down on the redundant packets that are stationary in one hand while the action is in the other. I'm not trying to put you down here - just trying to help.
Overall - not bad - 3/5 from me.
Cheers,
Shanku
PS. Your ace productions are really cool and I'd like to see more in the future.
did you rate it a 3 because you didn't like the 1st bit? if so that's a bit harsh
I enjoyed it and I thought the 1st part was pretty good, nice hand work.
dave 5/5
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