ElyarMagic,
Yes, I can not please everyone. : D
My mouth is open of course, if I concentrate on something else opens it.
It also did not like much of the video, my movements were not even natural.
i am sorry but i didnt like it.
your mouth was open allthe time and you have to not show people that it was scripted because you were moving like a robot sometmes because you wanted to do something and then all of a sudden you remembered that there is another trick before it.
try to flow and may people think that you didnt memorize tricks.
hahah
This video is almost 1 year, I was a beginner, I know the negative points, and has already improved.
Thank you staff, and comments by the attention.
I promise that after I do a better video.
I hope you have enjoyed.
when it comes down to performance,sleights, and the whole routine put together everything was perfect. like mikka said you clearly practiced this a lot. i would give you a 5/5 but dude close your mouth and open up your eyes a little more. you looked liek you were on an acid trip or something lol. other wise very good 4/5.
cuando todo se reduce a la ejecución, sleights, y toda la rutina de poner junto todo fue perfecto. mikka como dice claramente que esta practica mucho. i te darían un 5 / 5 pero dude cerrar su boca y abrir los ojos un poco más. le parecía que estaba en un viaje de ácido o algo lol. otro sabio muy bueno 4 / 5.
Awesome routine but have to agree with the others.
Watch David Stone's One coin routine, its still silent but he interacts using body language and facial expressions. Thats the key.
great routine, i agree with Sean about being a bit dry though, if u interact more with whoever watches the trick it is more enjoyable... but i like the idea of it being a silient routine... :D
nice routine man, we hope to c more of u...
- Tai
Very nice stuff. You clearly have practiced this one for some time and it really shows.
You still might wanna consider getting a new jacket since that one looks kinda big on you.
Technically speaking, it was very good. =) I was misdirected at the right times and I was clearly seeing what was happening with little to no clue how you were producing pens. =P
Performance speaking, it just seemed a little dry. Smile more, you've got a cheeky little smile which can really put a smile on the audiences faces and you can connect with them through that. Language is diverse, smiles are universal. A little patter would've been cool, but if you were going for the silent kind of manipulation act, I think you did it well. Especially at 00:56.
Nice job though man. =)
- Sean
Sean,
He did mention in his description - when first submitting the video - that he was from Brazil and his English wasn't all too great. This may have been the reason he decided against using patter while filming.
Hope this clears things up.
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