In addition to being a magician and mediocre hypnotist I am also a Somewhat expirianced medium. I can talk to spirits and entities.
I often use Ouija (Prononced: Weegie) boards to assist me but I am able to get EVP's when I am talking to the paranormal. I often get vibes from places even if I'mm not at the place and just see a picture. Your factory, I will tell you, is one hundred percent haunted. Don't swear or do anything disrespectful there. The spirits that reside in that building aren't all so nice.
I don't mean to scare you but I had to warn you. Be respectful and before you enter simply say: " Hello. To anyone who may be watching us, we wish you no harm. We are omly here to have a look around. If you wish to show yourself to us then, please, show up in or pictures and videos. Or make a loud noise. we mean no harm and we enter as friends."
Just making my point clear. That sentence should be said before entery everytime. Be CAREFUL.
We were very careful. We from the beginning thought that there would be ghosts/or spirits there. Although ive read Derrens book "The tricks of the mind" and seen seance is still think that there are some kind on 4d creatures/people/spirits etc walking around. So i think well keep that in mind when we go there even though alot of people go there and just break things.
ya know, there were some bad things in this movie but overall you guys did a great job putting this film together.
pros: shorty had some nice springs, cuts were done well, background REALLY cool (i loved all the crap in the hallway you guys were walking on) and the cinematography and editng was better than average.
cons: ya cuts get boring after awhile and it didn't look like you guys put your own style into it. like there was no joy in your expressions you were both so deadly serious and neutral while performing. it had zero personality except at the end when you guys hi-fived. more team-based flourishes would have been a good idea. also this vid needed more fans. big dude- that giant fan wasn't very nice, keep working on it though you were close.
4/5 stars from me doggs.
Yeahh, for me it was way too corny.
The beginning when you were waving your hand to the camera man to come with you . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . wow.
Then when you guys were walking through an ally, up the stairs, in a room, and we just see you start flourishing cards in a corner . . . . . . . . . . . . .wtf?
The story line was not that good, I feel like you were trying to copy another artists work. Don't get me wrong, the factory setting was good, it just would have been better without, "you see that factory, lets go in, go upstairs, and video tape us in the corner of a room" plot.
You should have made it like you found 2 decks of old cards in the factory as if it use to be a playing card factory, then you unwrap them and start doing flourishes.
The flourishes were good, and I agree that Mr. Madman should have used more variation in flourishing. Freazer, your flourishes were really good.
Good work.
I have not done flourishes that much. And the chin thing you saw only two times. The flourishes i do are either made by me or something that is quite easy or cool looking and not over complicated like the Werm.
To PTG: Actually yes...we didn´t think of going into the factory at first. But when we saw it we thought we should go in and see if its any good.
But thanks for the comments dudes :)
...so you "stumbled upon" an old factory with a camera-man, camcorder, and suit coat-thingy handy?....right....lol
4/5 from me, I think the taller kid could have had a little more variety....we saw that same chin cut about 3 times...
All in all, well done, keep practicing!
-PTG
well "stumbled upon", i'm from estonia and i dont even know what it means.. someone of the t11 crew added this description. mine was actually: a little flourishing video we made at an old factory, or something..
thanks anyway.
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