The Queens

there isnt a single part of this that couldnt use great improvement. If i were you i would go back and watch the explanation one more time and walk through every little subtlety and practice them individually in order to gain smoothness.

Bad Points: -Moves a bit sloppy -Moving the hand away of the camera is bad. -You move too much the hand in the clipshift Good Points: -You can do the trick very good with a little more work. -And you like good games (Portal, I notice that by the music)

I'm sorry but that wasn't great you just need to work on the break and the clipshift.

Need more practise.I like that trick~~haah~~

need more practise! I like that trick~~

The first two vanishes were too obvious for me. Although I have to admit, the third and the fourth were very smooth.

I don't know if you guys noticed, but he flashed in every vanish.

It seemed pretty rushed to me, and the sleights were a little choppy... 3/5

When I first heard the music, I was like...wow. As for the trick, the sleights need to be done quicker, because a layman would probably be suspicious.

where do you learn the last change?

Well all of the individual slieghts were great... but put together i looked really shaky. I also really love hearing patter not just music.. Would you show that to a layman? 3/5 from me

I take that back:: It was actually pretty bad, I was a noob at the time I posted this ^^

[that was a grate performances love ur work]