Simple

to be honest, when you rolled up the close up pad and lifted it up, i expected the aces to drop down out of it. created a little bit of a false expectation for and ending that i think would have made sense. i do realize the method behind the effect performed here, but don't think it overly absurd to produce that ending.

Not sure if I'm seeing things but when you pick up the cards put the fourth one in your hand and then count them you seem to be counting 5...

ehh, good concept but i didnt really like it

I could definitely see this concept playing well for an audience. Great submission!

Thanks guys I really appreciate your comments...yeah it is a bit sloppy but I was just an idea I got, so I filmed it right away, but anyways I got to keep on practicing... T

Wow! I am amazed. ;D

Economy of motion. Reduce all the movements that are rushed or unnecessary. Apart from that it was great.

Hey there. I thought some parts were a bit dodgy. But that's probably because im aware of sleights being executed. Maybe its just for those who know of the art that can notice it. Magician eyes, Yeah that's the term. Your elmsley seems a bit rushed. Why run when you're not being chased?

I liked it a lot. Too often, I believe that we create effects that aren't direct and simple for the audience to understand. This video was refreshing to see. Good job.

It seemed like there was some hesitation every now and then, and a little bit of sloppiness. . . all in all, I think it could've been performed a lot smoother. 4/5 for me. Very visual, though, just keep practicing!

the beggining was sloppy, but i enjoyed the rest