Add motion to your movement. Also, try to put more variety in your flourishes as well as not repeating them because it gets kind of stale. You performed sybilism and the half packet TG Murphy Deck flip multiple times. Try to get music with more rythm and beat to it. Other than that, it was pretty darn decent! 3.5/5.
Most of the stuff was small. Extend when you have to extend not keep it to yourself.
Alot of the same stuff over and over again, didnt really like that and the music really didnt go into the whole theme.
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Hello. I think you need to work on some stuff (as you probably already know) However kudos to your Molecule 2. You may need to give it a bit more time to elevate though. it doesnt look as flashy if it only jumps a couple of inches. Criticism on LePaul spread as well. Make it more curved. Loved the Rev.Erdnase/Erdnase from hell.
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