I really like the way you put the story together. It almost has a little "sam the bellhop" feel to it, just the way it flowed. The first vanish was unexpected, simple but I still got fooled. The following two vanishing sequence felt weak having to follow up to the first vanish. Great motivation for the display finish.
nice to see some patter.
needs some work, the patter, make it sound like it did happen, know the moves, how many players were there.
also i know you try to make it orginal with some of the handleing, like the first dissapearance, but it doesnt make sense to take the deck away, then bring it back again.
but just work on it. good patter.
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