"An amazing variation of Stuart James' 'Further Than That' - probably one of the best tricks ever. I hope you enjoy!"
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woner1116 years ago
Not too bad, it did lack energy and could have been condensed. The only thing that I could say that hasn't been said before is to be less obvious with the two of clubs when you are laying the remaining clubs down. Sorry if that is kinda vague, I'm trying to do it in a way which doesn't expose anything.
I only liked the end of this, You know, when you started doing magic. before the spelling reveal,which was about to the the middle of the video I was BORED OUT OF MY MIND. So in effect, half of the performance was extraordinarily unentertaining. Another element of many card tricks. I'd really like to see you add energy to your performance and find a way to keep the audience for the entire performance.
Not bad...the trick itself was well presented and your patter was well scripted, however it was sometimes very rough in areas. I found myself losing interest about half way through. Be sure to keep your patter engaging, but I did make it to the end and was quite impressed.
4/5
i enjoyed it very much. my criticisms would be that there was an excess of shuffling when it wasnt necessary, nervous perhaps? Also the extra shuffling led on well enough that the shuffles were false and cuts were false.
Not to say that i wasnt impressed and totally wasnt expecting that kind of trick, or that it wasnt pretty freakin awesome :)
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