TriFect

I like! A few comments... Firstly on presentation - a few comments above about it. Ok, it feels a little flat here. I think you've done well to put that together, and I'm sure it would play better live than it does to a video camera. That said, make sure that when you're presenting, you're not just speaking rehearsed lines! I think this was DJ's point. I don't think there's anything wrong though with having something scripted word for word - sometimes it's necessary - just make sure it doesn't sound like it when you deliver it! And secondly, a small thing - when the coin becomes "invisible" - the gap in your right hand was obviously too large. Nice Thriller pose, though.

Your right hand at 0:25 looks incredibly stiff and akward.

The patter was a little boring but you probably do it differently when you perform it for people...

The sleights were very well performed. But the patter was WAY to memorized and boring. Try to just memorize an outline of what you want to say. Then follow the outline and ad lib the details. It will sound a LOT more natural this way.

I like how you had your patter down. Good work.

This flows nicely! Nice work