Really good. I would say try to keep your right hand movements to as little as possible. There aren't very many movements, but minimizing that would help. After that, I would say your hands don't look normal with you are showing them empty, which might make it not look as magical. I'm sure this will all come in due time. I am working on things very similar to what I suggested, so we're in the same boat.
Nicely done, I do not know if your retention vanish is meant to look rocky or not. I am just saying the retention vanish could look better but hey, mine could look better too.
Over all, it damn fooled me. VERY NICELY DONE.
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