Not bad, the vanish needs a little work. During the second phase (:14) your hands reach a strange angle and they're too close to each other. Give some space for the coins to travel across, it doesn't seem like much - but think from an audience members perspective. Also, try to motivate some of your actions, it would be hard to give specifics without exposing. Just ask, what is the larger, logical action that you're doing, that the move just happens to be happening in the middle of. Overall nice video though, just some constructive criticism.
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