Fonti-Point

Like the above comment, Great idea, but try to slow waaaaaay down, take a breath and make the moments more magical and slower.

Your performance was very rushed, and there were many parts un-explained. By this I mean there were certain moves, or parts of the trick where the spectator would be thinking 'why did he do that?' As you didn't provide a reason for doing it. Also, at the beginning you did way to much shuffles, all you need to do is place it in the centre, who were you reassuring by saying it's lost so many times? You also are trying to turn the trick into you showing off your skill, that doesn't get the reactions. Simplicity is the best way to perform. You show I card, put it in the middle - that's it, no more shuffles. Also, you don't provide a personality whilst performing, you sound like a mindless move-monkey just explaining what's happening in the trick. Practice your patter, and maybe add a story or two :) Hope this helps :)