"My first cardistry video, after one year of magic and six months of flourishes."
DLeerium
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Sinful0717 years ago
Hurts my eyes. Good quality if you asked me. Loved Repainted and Damn straight. Not too keen on the table work at the end. sort of ruined the flow. Your snap change/Twinsplit remix is cool too.
and that dribble is quite cool too. Love the blooper at the end.
very well done.
Good Job. Love this Video Due to the fact in the end you drop the cards makes people understand No one is perfect and everything takes practice. You Showed you also have a different way of thinking meaning you don't care if you mess up which I think it's Cool. People today try and make its seem like there the best and Your not c*cky or a show off. keep up the good work. And I commend you for Showing the blooper Makes you different and Human Not many people would do that. Good Stuff..!
Haha. That Re-painted looked interesting since you couldn't even see the blank fan. Overall, you had some very nice moves. That Eye Cut was rebeling Bone himself. The only thing I would change is the lighting and the editing. It was hard to see the cards sometimes and the editing needed some work. Overall, not bad at all. 4/5 from me.
Whats the meaning of filming in a studio when you can't see the cards??
If I could have seen the cards in the flourishing part, I am sure that it would have looked good, but as it was now. I really don't know, since I didn't see the cards! A total waste of time in my opinion. The tabled magic was the only thing that was worth the time.
OHH damn i did forget to mention bone..i just checked my credits again.. i mentioned bone b4 but my comp crashed and i had to rush to finish my credits.. sorry to those who got offended.
ps: I dont own any flourishing videos. Everything i learnt off youtube and those nice people who post up tutorials. Stuff like eye cut, repainted etc was learnt by rewatching the orginal video many many Many! times over in order to get it right.
I'm not sure what you were trying to achieve using white cards on white background, but you got yourself and Invisible Deck. Only Repainted looked nice, otherwise, stick to contrasting cards and background or at least use your clothes as a background. I like the old school moves but try to have less cuts so you can actually show some style in transitioning and routines, this is just too cut up and we only see single flourishes with no character... I liked the Eye cut but you forgot to credit Bone (for the Anaconda as well) . I'm sure people have said all this already, but just so you get the message :)
Overall, not bad. Make some more videos, you've got the flourishes down, it's the filming and editing which take away from the video.
haha quite alotta peopel are asking me about the white background..
well the raw footage was a light blue background. I just brightened everything up in editing, hence my ghost cards isnt visible.
thanks for the comments whether postive or negative
cool video. but i just wanna ask one thing how do you get that white backgound? do you edit it in or like go to a studio, or maybe a white bed sheet? What is the best way?
that was really good....nice job...nice choice of song and I liked how u made the giant fan with tally ho vipers and some other cards i forgot...the black and white looked really cool mixed like that
i agree with everyone else about not being able to see the white cards on white background with overexposed editing. apology not accepted dog, 2/5 from me.
3/5 for me, pretty good fans and one handed cuts but the sybils were ok and the ghosts with the white background were hard to see. had you used vipers the whole time I would've given this video a 5/5
It looks like a poor copy of Virtuoso's vid, eg. the white background and some parts it was filmed.
The moves generally were okay... but since it's only been 6months then kudos to you. Boring to watch really especially with such a laid back music and it's pretty long. The sudden change to table magic was unnecessary. It seems as if you just chuck all the clips together and make a video.
Seriously though, it wld give a different light if it had been well- edited.
Credits wise, you have to give them credit even if they had a tutorial on it. It's only polite. :P
sorry for the lack of creativity...i was never really taught the basics and every move there was just copied off other peoples flourishing vids -_- so i guess it lacks creativity in a sense
:P read the above comments...I think some of it was harsh :P or maybe I am in a good mood, but I liked :) , moves were fairly decent ,but the transition between some crazy moves and some "basic" table moves...wasn't the greatest finnish I have say...overall like I said I liked :) and good choice of music hehe I was wondering whether someone will use at some point, although I prefer the version with timbaland in the background XD 4/5
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