other than the parts where you flashed..i liked it...the thing with the ace's was sweet, i do it as a lone effect for people at the university and on the streets....
This isn't my story, just a typical one.
ok..yeah i see ur right....shake change...my bad....ohh i know it wasn't your life...i was making a joke about the person not being able to kick the habit....Haha, thanks, I really appreciate that man. Lol, about the Jack thing, I didn't think about that but that sounds about right haha. It wasn't a shapeshifter though, just a simple shake change.
Oh, and I should add as a disclaimer, I don't do drugs.
I just hate it when people start talking about religion and Jesus and such. As to how you could make everything tie together, I'm not exactly sure. I do think that there is no real progression in the magical aspect and that all you're doing is performing a bunch of sleights mixed together in a really long routine. The whole thing seems anticlimactic. I'm not sure if that made any sense, but it does in my head.
maybe it was the stops, the pauses, and studders, you gotta give him the whole God, making the problems go away....now what would have been a real climax, even something that would have suited even yourself....Don't take what i said personally. I don't wanna punch you in the face.
If I were him, I'd take out the part about God because that is very off putting not only to me, but everyone who doesn't care about Jesus and wants to be entertained with magic. I found the whole thing to be anticlimactic because so many things happened at once. "You lost your girl. Let's find some money. Your money's gone. Let's get some drugs." If it were told as an actual story about a person and less ambiguous, then I personally would find it more entertaining. "Willie Boi lost his girlfriend because he didn't have a job and couldn't support her. So he got a job working at McDonald's, but lost his job and got robbed but his friend Bobby was a drug dealer, etc." You get the idea.
not knocking your idea....but if you are telling a true story or something thats has to do with life...i'm not saying to be religious, but he his telling the truth...i don't think it was meant to be magic....maybe a lecture of flourishes and moves...but not all the way magic...
i was saying that i don't think he was trying to do any magic effects....just a lecture...using simple moves....
i agree....Ohh man you describe the real life in a magical way, keep it up VERY good work man! Just work on your technique and you will have the coolest routine on theory11
