Ace of Spades

[Jase]

Hey guys. I figured since i havent really posted before id start by saying hello.

Anyway here is an ace i designed when i got bored the other day. It was only a 2 min job but i figured i would show it and get some feedback from you guys.

Owell here it is. http://img246.imageshack.us/my.php?image=ace1to2.jpg

-Jase

Ps. Ignore the background.

 

[Mr.MadMan]

The Background is not good for a card design

The reflection thing is getting on my nerves. Web2.0 is dead but lets go on... Its a great concept though you should put more detail work into it. The bottom is kinda fade take that off it dosent fit in with the rest of the Spade. Make it a bit less wide. Its kinda fat looking. Also make the green into a red. I think that would give it a nice effect. Those grass sticks dont really go into the whole theme. Try to make the inside of the ace a bit more mysterious. Its looks kinda empty right now.

Hope this helped

Mikk

 

[Jase]

Lol okay updated version.

Oh um i didn't really want anyone to look at the background. I just put it there so it wasn't so boring. Anyway in this version i put some different colours down the side and removed the reflection and background. It is also slightly narrower.

http://img296.imageshack.us/my.php?image=acemq9.jpg

 

[JDENredden]

I dont like it all, no-offense. But it dosent seam magic like. Nice work tho.

JDEN

 

[Flyspazz]

Jase. Hello and welcome,

I dont think it looks that bad. I like some of the ideas there.

Be your own man. Its your creation and it only matters if you like it or not.

 

[popchris3]

I really like it. I think you could make a sweet back design to compliment the ace as well.

 

[filth0013]

i hate modern card designs. bleh.

 

[chrystal baller]

i would like to see it with a black center and white borders

 

[StevenLevitt]

Has a nice modern feel to it. I like it.