Business Card Feedback

[Ziemes72]

What do you guys think of my 1st card? What would make it better?

 

[tsarothpaco]

Its nice, nothing to flashy.

You could drop the AoH concept and put some cool artwork in the background.
Something to make them love this business card

~PaCo

 

[dejavu05]

Nice. If you haven't learned a trick with a business card I would learn one. It is nice to present it in a magical way. Even a backpalm or something like that.

 

[VladiD]

I think everything is kinda crowded towards the top right corner.

I don't know how good this will work, but if u center the text more relative to the two index corners and then flip the heart symbol upright in the middle of that it might work out with symmetry. Just a suggestion you can try it and see how it turns out.

 

[Dylan P.]

It is pretty good. I think maybe though instead of the ace of hearts you could have somethng a little bit more eye catching.

 

[I_KnowMagic]

Maybe you could make it black and white. That might make it a little more eye catching.

 

[RichmanMatthew]

I'm not sure I like the background color. It's a pretty good layout though. My card is attached.